so for this its diving above the new and improved prologue. i know it still needs work but jus give me your opinion and maybe post some of your own stuff. ok hope you like it.
“Next!” the cold man in the dark uniform behind the podium barked. The next person stepped up. Her tiny face hidden by her flowing bronze hair she handed him her ticket. She ran her fingers through her plaid blue dress and her mother crossed her arms behind her. “Malic, Amber.” He murmured while reading her ticket. “And you were from Laskar?” he leaned down, his dead eyes bored into the little girl. “Yes sir.” She squeaked. He held the ticket out to her. She hesitated to grab the ticket, it started to scream to her If you take me you will die! She grabbed it and scurried to the side waiting for her mom. “Mommy?” she asked once her mom started to walk over. “Why do we have to go there?” she pointed toward the line of people filling into the large hole in the ground. “Well you see.” The women took her hand and led her toward the line. “There are to many people above ground and that are poor. So they are going to send us down here and it will be great! Ok now we’ll have a big house and you’ll make friends. Don’t worry it will be fun!” The girl narrowed her eyes at the hole and snarled at it. “It doesn’t look Fun.” She mumbled. “Are we ever going to come back above ground?” she looked back at the line of people, a baby crying, old men arguing, kids rushing around. “I don’t know sweetie. We’re just going to have to see.” She snorted and thought to herself we shouldn’t have to see. We shouldn’t be bullied by the stupid politicians. It isn’t fair! “Will we see the sun?” she asked. “I’m not sure about that but-“
“Will there be plants?”
“Well no but that doesn’t mean-“
“Will there be anything like nature at all?”
Her mother sighed. “probably not.”
“Then why are we going!” the girl stomped her foot and wailed “I don’t wanna go!” Her mother grabbed her wrist and leaned down and whispered in her ear “It’s not my choice Amber if you would stop acting like a baby you might find out that we have to go down there” A tear dropped on the pavement and the girl looked away. “Next!” a shrill voice called and the girl looked up realizing they were in front of the large hole. “Ok ready honey?” her mom looked down and fake smiled. The girl nodded slowly and took a step toward the awaiting darkness.